wowgetoffyourcellphone
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wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:52:51 +02:00
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I like "Open" here instead of "Use," but it's nbd.

wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:52:08 +02:00
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Market.

wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:51:29 +02:00
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"Slow down or reverse the decay process by..."

wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:50:59 +02:00
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points

wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:49:49 +02:00
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  • Research a suite of helpful healing technologies.
wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:49:24 +02:00
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C2A: (you, player) "Train Healers from here to..."

wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:48:10 +02:00
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Awkward sentence. So, perhaps:

  • Forms the men into tight ranks and deep files, allowing a wall of forward-thrusting pikes (aka "sarissas") to pierce any enemy soldier foolish enough launch a…
wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:43:04 +02:00
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Minus "yourself."

wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:40:43 +02:00
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Could say:

  • The heaviest standard warship. Available to select civilizations.

Or something similar when saying such a thing about a unit or building is warranted, but you don't want to…

wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:39:06 +02:00
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  • Customize the health threshold in Settings > Game Session.
wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:37:48 +02:00
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...at a crucial moment.

wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:37:03 +02:00
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Suggestion:

wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:33:04 +02:00
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Generally, I'd leave out phrases like "you can" so that the whole sentence becomes a C2A.

wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:30:06 +02:00
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Either:

wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:28:10 +02:00
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  • A quick, cheap wooden wall for a moderate defense.
wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:26:20 +02:00
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Also, maybe we can be consistent with where to put things in the bullet point list. "Availability" strings could/should be the first item in the list consistently.

wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:25:18 +02:00
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  • Cheap and quickly built, but weak and easily captured.
wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:24:48 +02:00
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  • Build in neutral or own territory to see large areas of the map.
wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:23:55 +02:00
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  • Right-click while holding the “Order one unit” hotkey (by default ALT) and only one random unit from the current selection will perform the assigned task.
wowgetoffyourcell... commented on pull request 0ad/0ad#6957 2024-08-31 22:21:32 +02:00
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No longer has this aura. However, the Worker Elephant can construct buildings.